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The Stagecoach Scenario

September 17, 2014 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 7 Comments


A number of years ago, I came up with a definition of my own for a plot device that I recognized as one of the most frequently-used and filled with possibilities. I call it the Stagecoach Scenario.

I borrowed the name from the classic 1939 movie Stagecoach, which demonstrates the idea in its most basic form. The setup is this: a group of people, usually (but not always) diverse in personality, background, profession and, depending on the setting of the story, social class—people who ordinarily would have little or no contact with one another—brought together in close quarters while traveling. Usually they are strangers to one another, sometimes there are unexpected (possibly unpleasant) reunions with past acquaintances involved. On the journey, some outside force poses a danger and/or strands them midway on their route, forcing them into closer communication with each other through a common struggle for survival. As a result, tensions and various relationships among the individuals come into play. The story’s conflict derives from both the question of whether they will escape the threatened disaster and what will happen among them in the meantime.

All these elements are easily identifiable in Stagecoach: the close quarters are the stagecoach itself, the passengers the varied group of characters, the journey across the desert, the hostile Indians are the danger from outside. But once you’ve recognized the basic plot structure, you can see it framing dozens of different stories. A modern equivalent is the airplane disaster film, from The High and the Mighty onward. You have basically the same setup: the diverse group of passengers, the outside force of engine trouble or weather literally threatening the safety of the plane. With a few variations, you could have the same situation on a ship—or a train—or even a bus.

Introducing a crime and a criminal into the pool of characters adds another layer of complexity. Who is hiding something? Is one of the group not what they seem to be? Do they pose a hazard to their companions? The Stagecoach Scenario even serves as the frame for classic whodunits. Agatha Christie used it multiple times with stunning results. Murder On the Orient Express is a stellar example of the travel plot, with the snowbound train serving as the close quarters. In true Christie fashion she uses the basic setup, a crowd of diverse characters thrown together, as an integral part of her mystery plot. The limited amount of people present in a travel setting is helpful for a mystery writer, as John Curran notes in Agatha Christie’s Secret Notebooks; it provides a limited pool of suspects to concentrate on, and the usually remote location also gives the detective a free hand (as in Appointment With Death, for instance). It’s the outside force, the stranding snow, that gives Poirot the freedom to make his investigation in Murder On the Orient Express. Christie successfully used almost every single method of transportation mentioned above, including the ship (Death On the Nile) and the airplane (Death In the Clouds), but Murder On the Orient Express remains the finest example of ‘stranded murder.’

But the Stagecoach Scenario can be stationary too. Take the hostage story, for instance (The Petrified Forest is a textbook case). In war stories or in Westerns, a siege produces the same effect: trapped characters, outside threat and internal conflict. The Old West is a particularly propitious setting, considering that it’s filled with potential outside dangers and a great diversity of character types that can be brought together. An excellent example of this in book form is Last Stand At Papago Wells by Louis L’Amour. In this story the group of characters—men and women, Army and civilian, innocent and guilty, fugitives and pursuers—are trapped in a desert stronghold, surrounded by hostile Apaches and with a diminishing supply of water, with the tensions and suspicion among themselves proving an enemy as dangerous as the Indians.

It doesn’t stop there. I’ve noticed that some war movies share a similar structure—again you have the dissimilar group (the soldiers, recruited from all walks of life) the exotic locale (overseas) the outside danger (hazards of war), the characters forced into close association and dependence on each other. And then there’s the classic English country-house mystery, another device for gathering a cross-section of characters together and watching the sparks fly.

The defining feature of this scenario, in whatever setting, is that it’s character-driven. Outside forces may apply the pressure, but the interest lies in how the characters react to it and how they interact with each other while under that pressure. And this is where the author steps in, to craft their own unique characters and build their own story off the basic foundation. That’s why I love this scenario—the possibilities are endless. Once aboard the stagecoach, anything can happen.

So what are your favorite examples of the Stagecoach Scenario in books and film? How many additional variations can you think of?

Adapted from an old piece on a now-defunct prior blog.
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Filed Under: Mysteries, Plot, Westerns

Favorite Western Film Scores

August 11, 2014 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 10 Comments

Film scores are among my favorite kinds of music—and many of my favorite scores are from Westerns. To me, the colorful, energetic (and Copland-influenced) style that Elmer Bernstein and others developed in the early ’60s is the signature Western film-score sound, even though most of my favorite Western movies come from earlier decades. It seems a shame that just as this wonderful music style was developing, Western movies were already changing, and the traditional Western would be well on the downward slide by the end of the decade. There ought to have been more movies and better movies to go with scores like this!

But anyway, to return to the subject of this post—I’ve done plenty of talking about Westerns, and a good deal about music, so I thought it was about time I did a post on my very favorite Western film scores. So here are my top three:

Updated in 2019 to be a top-five list!

1. The Cowboys (1973) by John Williams
I wish the traditional Western movie had lasted another decade if only so John Williams could have written more scores like this. It’s got everything—a lively, toe-tapping main theme with sparkling orchestrations, which reappears with a fresh twist and creative syncopation for each action scene; plus a couple of achingly beautiful slow themes. (Not to mention that utterly odd bass harmonica villain’s theme.) I love practically every minute of this soundtrack.

2. The Magnificent Seven (1960) by Elmer Bernstein
It’s a classic, that’s all there is to it. It’s practically impossible not to get a huge grin on your face when you listen to the exuberant main theme. This is one of those scores that really ‘makes’ its movie—can you honestly imagine the film without it? I knew the music long before I ever saw the movie, and when I finally did see it, I was astonished that some of the most energetic cues, which sounded like they came from all-out action scenes, actually belonged to moments where not much was happening onscreen. As the CD liner notes observe, the music supplies much of the film’s energy.

3. The Big Country (1958) by Jerome Moross
A slightly earlier score, but with a similar sensibility. The marvelous sweeping main theme is undoubtedly the best part; it’s another one of those pieces that you just can’t help loving, both in the grand main title and the lovely slower renditions later on. There’s other good moments throughout the score too.

4. The Proud Rebel by Jerome Moross
Sometimes I’m not sure which of the two Moross scores is my favorite. The main theme of The Big Country wins out easily, but then the gentler melodies that make up the main body of The Proud Rebel‘s soundtrack tip the scale in the other direction. It also features a brief, ominous martial theme harking back to memories of the Civil War in the story, and some tense and energetic action music too—and many chords and phrases that betray the hand of the same composer in both scores.

5. Lonesome Dove by Basil Poledouris
I love, love the main theme music from this score. The rich, sweeping melody could be the soundtrack to just about anything Western that you wanted it to be. Some other parts of the soundtrack are a little too jangly and twangy for my taste, but a few of my favorite tracks that feature the main theme are “Night Mares,” “The Leaving,” and “Captain Call’s Journey.”

Runners-up: Red River by Dimitri Tiomkin; The Sons of Katie Elder (1965) and The Comancheros (1961), both by Elmer Bernstein; the gorgeous main theme to Rio Grande (1950) by Victor Young; The Searchers (1956) by Max Steiner; Dances With Wolves (1990) by John Barry. I also really like the main theme of Silverado (1985) by Bruce Broughton, though I haven’t heard the whole score.

It is a curious thing that my favorite scores don’t come from my favorite movies. Several of these films I’ve never seen, haven’t seen all the way through, or didn’t particularly care for. Favorite films are a subject for another day. But anyway…what are your favorite Western movie scores?

image: “Hazing the Herd” by Olaf Wieghorst

Filed Under: Film and TV, Music, Westerns

Left-Hand Kelly: A Long, Long Trail

May 15, 2014 by Elisabeth Grace Foley Leave a Comment

The release of my next book, Left-Hand Kelly, is fast approaching. A cover is in the works, and most of the other prep work is already complete—basically just final proofreads remain.

This has been one slow-cooked little novella. Though shy of 40,000 words, it has taken several years from initial idea to completion. But I had no idea just how long it had been in the works until the other day, when I got out my old journals and began flipping back through them, looking for the earliest entries relating to Left-Hand Kelly. The more pages I turned back, amazement began to dawn on me. Wait, when was this? Mentions of Left-Hand Kelly as an incomplete project were sandwiched in among notes about working on the earliest stories for The Ranch Next Door and Other Stories. Way back before I’d decided to collect them, in fact, and was still unsuccessfully trying to find professional short story markets. A reference to “the first three chapters” of Left-Hand Kelly having been written some time ago predates my first published story “Disturbing the Peace” placing in a contest in December of 2010. Shortly before that is a big gap in my journal entries—I was not a good diarist back then—so I couldn’t find a mention of beginning the book, but I did have my dated first-draft manuscript in a notebook. I pulled it out and looked at it.

June 19th, 2010.

Four years ago! Almost exactly four years from first draft to publication.

It goes without saying that I was not working on it continuously all that time. I’d write a few chapters, get stuck, put it away for months, and then come back to it later. It held enough interest and promise for me that I did keep coming back. “It appeals to me because there’s a tremendous amount of emotion packed into a pretty brief plot,” I wrote in that earliest journal entry. As near as I can figure, from margin dates and journal entries, I wrote the first three chapters in the summer of 2010, chapter four and part of chapter five that December, the rest of five through seven in April and May 2012, and then finally picked it up again in late January 2013 and finished the eight remaining chapters in February. Various rounds of edits have taken place since then.

What amazes me is that around the same time I was writing those first three chapters, I was also turning out some horribly amateurish stuff that will probably never see the light of day. Yet the beginning of Left-Hand Kelly, with only reasonable editing, was good enough to keep me coming back to it and blends well with the later parts of the book. Don’t ask me how that came about. All I know is, it makes me feel a lot better about the sheaf of unfinished projects that I still believe hold promise. It may take years, but one day they’ll get there.

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Filed Under: Left-Hand Kelly, The Writing Life, Westerns

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