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From the Archives: The Interrupted Party

April 11, 2023 by Elisabeth Grace Foley Leave a Comment

There was a sound of revelry by night,
And Belgium’s capital had gathered then
Her beauty and her chivalry, and bright
The lamps shone o’er fair women and brave men.
A thousand hearts beat happily; and when
Music arose with its voluptuous swell,
Soft eyes looked love to eyes which spake again,
And all went merry as a marriage bell;
But hush! hark! a deep sound strikes like a rising knell!

~ Byron, “Childe Harold’s Pilgrimage,” Canto III, verse XXI

I don’t know how old I was when I first read that poem, but I know that the whole “Eve of Waterloo” passage has had a strong hold on my imagination ever since. When I was a teenager it was a major inspiration for scenes in a Civil War epic that never actually ended up getting written (with Culpeper and Brandy Station standing in for Brussels and Waterloo). Something about its image of gaiety interrupted by the threat of danger, romance threatened with impending doom, evokes a sense of drama and poignancy that’s hard to summarize. (Do read the whole passage; it’s well worth it.) And eventually, this passage also helped me to recognize a plot device—perhaps something that could even be called a trope—that I’d absently noted recurring across the works of one particular film director: what I’ve come to call the Interrupted Party.

Classic-movie enthusiasts probably know this: if there is a dinner, dance or party in a John Ford film, chances are one of two things will happen: (A) a serenade, or (B) an interruption, in the form of a battle, bad news, or an unexpected arrival. Wee Willie Winkie, The Searchers, Wagon Master, Drums Along the Mohawk: one interruption apiece. They Were Expendable: one serenade and one interruption. Fort Apache: one serenade and two interruptions (I think that might be the record). Rio Grande: two serenades and two incidents that feel like interruptions, even though they technically take place after the party’s over and everyone’s gone home. The Grapes of Wrath has an attempted interruption; How Green Was My Valley a couple of quasi-interruptions (an unexpected guest arriving at one party, an argument among the guests at another). If a punch thrown at a wedding reception counts as an interruption, The Quiet Man has one too.

At about this point, I started getting the feeling that somebody thought this was a good idea.

If you think about it a little more you realize this is a recurring device across films and stories in general; Ford films just seemed to refine it into a kind of art. For a famous non-Ford example, take the Twelve Oaks barbecue in Gone With the Wind, which ends with the men pouring out of the house to join the army at news of the Civil War’s beginning. Or the serenity of Lady Ludlow’s garden party in Cranford shattered by the news that THE RAILROAD IS COMING. B-Western scriptwriters caught onto it too: off the top of my head, I can think of at least twenty B-Westerns where a celebration of some kind is interrupted by a hold-up, bank robbery, cattle-rustling, horse-theft, fistfight, or some other knavery. B-Western screenwriting is plot scraped down to its barest framework, free of additional layers like character development, motivation or emotion (or at least only utilizes them in a superficial degree). But you can still build excitement and humor off that framework, which is what the best examples of the genre do well. And the writers knew the value of an interrupted party.

So I started considering: what are the benefits to a story? I came up with a couple ideas of my own. First, a celebration of some kind gathers all or most of your story’s cast together in one place. Whatever the interruption is, everyone is there to learn of it, react to it, maybe discuss it; you can choose anyone you like to take part in the reaction or discussion. If it’s an important event, it’s a catalyst for everybody.

Second—and I think this is more important—it creates a dramatic mood shift. It emphasizes the significance, and possibly the wrongness, of whatever is interrupting. It’s a bit like what P.D. James observed in Talking About Detective Fiction (I am paraphrasing dramatically here), that one body in a country library automatically makes the crime more shocking than a dozen crimes in a big-city alleyway—because it’s incongruous, it’s out of place. Isn’t it more of a shock to have a battle or bad news put an abrupt end to gaiety than to have it come when everyone is already sobered or on edge with expecting it?

I wonder in which medium it’s easier to create the necessary atmosphere of gaiety, and then pull off that mood shift—fiction or film? I honestly think it can be done in either, though it may be a little more obvious and require less effort in film. But let’s not forget that Byron produced that breathtaking original example with simply words on paper.

It was a minor epiphany to realize that I’d actually been using this device myself without even trying—the unpublished novel I was working on at the time I made these observations had a perfect example of an Interrupted Party right smack in the middle of it. Land of Hills and Valleys also features an absolutely classic Interrupted Party as the climax to Part I, which, if my memory serves me right, dates back to the original draft of the story around thirteen years ago. And to bring things full circle, I actually used lines from “The Eve of Waterloo” as the chapter epigraph, something I’d been longing to do for years. I’m still tickled by the way they fit every time I look at the page.

What are your favorite examples of an interrupted party in fiction or film? If you’re a writer, have you written this kind of scene yourself?

This is a slightly revised version of a post originally from 2015.

Filed Under: Epigraphs, Film and TV, Land of Hills and Valleys, Plot, Poetry

Fairytales on the Menu

August 31, 2015 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 5 Comments

As I mentioned in a recent post, I’ve been having a lot of fun with fairytale retellings lately. It’s a genre I was never even really aware of until Rooglewood Press’s Five Glass Slippers competition gave me the inspiration to write Corral Nocturne. Writing for that contest and reading the winning entries was such fun, I’ve long toyed with the idea of writing more fairytale-based stories at some point. More recently, I’ve been inspired by Suzannah Rowntree’s wonderfully creative takes on both well-known and lesser-known fairytales. So the long and the short of it is, I have a couple more of my own in various stages of pre-production (to borrow a filmmaker’s term). Lost Lake House is a retelling of the Twelve Dancing Princesses set in the Roaring ’20s. And The Mountain of the Wolf, an idea that basically came out of nowhere and smacked me between the eyes this month, is a Western tale of outlaws and revenge based on Little Red Riding Hood. I’m planning to work on one or both of these over this autumn.

Along the way, I’ve been considering the question of why fairytale retellings are such fun to read and especially to write. Perhaps the appeal lies in starting with an existing story structure—for writers like myself, anyway, who find crafting a cohesive plot one of our biggest challenges! The few main plot points are laid out for you, almost like a template, leaving you free to play with the more colorful and subjective elements of character and setting to your heart’s content.

Looking for a metaphor, I thought at first of comparing it to a recipe, but then thought better of it: you don’t have quite so much freedom to shuffle the ingredients of a recipe. It’s more like a menu. On a menu you have a list of categories or components—appetizer, soup, meat, vegetable, side dish, dessert—and it’s up to you to fill in the blank on each and come up with as many different combinations you can think of, using a specified number of each of those pieces.

So, to take the most familiar example, the list of components for a Cinderella story looks something like this:

Key components (main dish and entrees, shall we say)

  • 1 heroine in unhappy or restricted circumstances (Cinderella)
  • 1 unkind relative/figure of authority responsible for heroine’s unhappy state (Wicked Stepmother)
  • 1 hero, deemed inaccessible to heroine by his station in life or some other circumstance (The Prince)
  • 1 important event at which hero and heroine are brought together, with a crucial moment or disaster coming at midnight (The Ball)
  • 1 benefactor who makes it possible for heroine to attend said event (Fairy Godmother)
  • 1 lost shoe that proves vital to the heroine’s fortunes (The Glass Slipper)

Minor components, optional (appetizers and desserts, if you will)

  • 2 other relatives/persons in heroine’s life who assist in making her unhappy; also frequently rivals for hero’s attention (Wicked Stepsisters)
  • Parent or parents of hero, preferably in position of authority and/or grandeur (King and possibly Queen)
  • Variable number of small friends or allies of heroine (mice, dogs, horses, etc.)

Putting it that way, you see how innumerable variations can be crafted on this one basic plot! How many difficult situations can we think of for our heroine to be trapped in (we writers are much too good at inflicting trouble on our characters), how many different eccentric or unlikely benefactors can we invent—how many creative uses can we find for a stray shoe? (Has anyone done a version where the shoe gets flung at someone?) Outlining my second and third, I’ve realized that my own particular angle on retellings—unintentional but consistent—is their real-world setting. They’re straight historical fiction, without magical creatures or imaginary kingdoms involved, but still paralleling the characters and plot of the original fairytale. Coming up with those real-world equivalents is a fun challenge.

Do you enjoy fairytale retellings? If so, what do you think makes them fun to read and write?

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Filed Under: Corral Nocturne, Fairytales, Plot

The Western and an Element of Humanity

April 18, 2015 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 5 Comments

The other day, I was considering the question of why I like some of Louis L’Amour’s books very much, yet others of his leave me fairly unenthused. Mentally comparing a few titles, I recognized a pattern in the ones I found less satisfying: after setting up an interesting situation in the first half or two-thirds of the book, the final section is almost entirely devoted to a long running fight, usually with the book’s hero trying to escape rather large odds of villainy. Any questions or mysteries involved in the plot have either been summarily solved or put aside, and the only question left is one of will-they-escape.

For instance, the last L’Amour I read, The Man Called Noon, started off with a fascinating premise: in the opening sentence the protagonist regains consciousness after a fall to find that he’s lost his memory…and he’s being hunted without his knowing why. The first half of the book, as he tries to piece together the clues to his own identity and stay a step ahead of whoever wants to kill him, is well-constructed and compelling. Then about midway through, the focus of the story shifts a little to a cache of money that the villains of the book are out to get. The young woman who is the rightful heir to the money is unaware of its existence, and when she does find out, doesn’t care greatly about having it; all she wants is her ranch free of the outlaws who have seized control. And that right there is as deep as L’Amour goes—he doesn’t explore in the least the drama inherent in the idea of a girl being unaware of her inheritance, or the moment of her discovering it, or why she doesn’t care about it. The only real reason the hero is fighting from then on is to keep the money away from the villains, who obviously shouldn’t have it, and of course to keep himself and the heroine from getting killed by the villains in the process.

The Man Called Noon was an entertaining read, and yet for me it lacked a certain something that I’ve found in other books, even other books by the same author. And pondering why crystallized some ideas about the Western in my mind. I like Westerns, and I’m no snob about the tropes of the genre—I’ll enjoy a good sharp fight or a suspenseful chase scene as much as anyone, provided it’s not overdone. But for a Western story to really draw me in and make me care about it, there has to be a strong human story underpinning whatever familiar tropes are used. The question of the plot can’t be as simple as whether we’re going to get the stolen money back from the bank robbers, or catch the outlaw who shot a man, or whether the cattle drive will get to Abilene. Who does the theft of the money or the death of the murdered man affect—why—how? Why are the pursuers bent on catching the criminals—simply for justice, or are there personal reasons? Who stands to lose if the cattle drive doesn’t get to Abilene, and what will they lose? Who feels the responsibility for getting it there, and why?

And I realize it doesn’t just work for me this way as a reader; that’s the way my mind works when I’m inventing a story of my own. I instinctively grab hold of the end of it that involves people first. If you can get this kind of thing in your story, and make the reader really care about the characters involved, then I don’t think you have to worry about situations being clichéd. Human nature is capable of infinite variations, and when a gunfight or a chase becomes the stage on which those variations are played out, then a Western can be as compelling a drama as any other genre.

image: Maynard Dixon illustration for The Texican by Dane Coolidge (1911)

Filed Under: Plot, Westerns

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