Elisabeth Grace Foley

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August Snippets

August 26, 2016 by Elisabeth Grace Foley Leave a Comment

Somewhere amidst the natural disarrangement of schedules that comes with a week of family vacation, and the added complication of nursing an injured dog, I did manage to complete my main goal for August: editing the first draft of The Mountain of the Wolf. (And now I can stop referring to it as “the first draft of” and be glad of it, for with that title there are entirely too many “ofs” in the sentence.) It is a great and happy relief to have it finished and on its way to beta-readers.

The Mountain of the Wolf will be coming to an e-reader near you in late 2016—as a matter of fact, I have some rather exciting plans afoot concerning this story’s publication. I shall say no more just yet, but watch this space for an announcement sometime in the next couple of months! In the meantime, to celebrate the wind-up of this draft, here are a few snippets:

Somehow he and his noisy voice and presence were out of the house, and Rosa Jean hastily closed the door behind him. She wanted to think. She felt she had been given the key to a riddle, if only she could pick it out of everything else jumbled in Charlie’s speech. She went in and sat on the edge of her bed, one hand on either side of her, and stared at the opposite wall.

He was hardly in the saddle when a wolf’s howl rose loud from somewhere close by and both horses jumped. Quincy steadied Pheasant with the reins and spoke to them in low tones, meaningless words, while his mind was occupied with a pithy and fervent prayer that the wolves would mind their own business tonight.

Rosa Jean heard the thunder of hooves and dropped her rolling pin to run for the door, only to falter to a stop halfway. It was queer the way that sound still made her heart give a little jump of excitement and then just as quickly the thud of sickening remembrance.

Again he saw it—her expression shut up like a door being closed; her mouth set straight and her eyes offering no clue to her thoughts. It must hurt, he thought involuntarily, to do that…he did not know where the unsettling thought sprang from.

The white head swung slowly toward him, and the old man’s blank eyes stared. Quincy nodded to him. “Your name’s Sullivan, isn’t it?”

The old man bent over and began doing something vaguely with a rope and bucket at his feet—he half glanced sideways at Quincy without looking up at his face. “I ain’t got any whisky,” he mumbled. “I tol’ you I ain’t got any.”

 

image: Robbers’ Roost, Utah // Wikimedia

Filed Under: Snippets of Story, The Mountain of the Wolf, Westerns

The Storytelling Score of Red River (1948)

August 4, 2016 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 8 Comments

I never used to pay too much attention to the score of Red River. I thought of it as fairly nice, rousing, but generic music that mostly took a back seat to the action of the movie. But last year when one of my sisters got the soundtrack CD (a full recreation by the Moscow Symphony Choir and Orchestra), and I was able to listen to the full score independent of the film for the first time, I realized with some surprise what a great score it really is—and most of all, how cleverly composer Dimitri Tiomkin used his various themes to underscore the different elements of the story.

The backbone of the score is made up of three melodies: two original songs by Tiomkin with lyrics by Ned Washington, “Settle Down” and “Off to Missouri” (at least I assume that’s the title), and the folk song “Old Chisolm Trail.” From the beginning of the film, the vigorous, swinging waltz tune of “Off to Missouri” is linked with cattle—branding them, raising them, rounding them up, and finally throwing them on the trail north—it’s the theme for the cattle drive itself, accompanying the trail scenes in a dozen different moods and tempos. The sweeping melody of “Settle Down” seems to be linked with the Red River itself, as well as Dunson’s Red River D brand named after it, and gradually becomes the over-arching theme for the whole story.

(I should mention here that I’ve never been able to decipher most of the lyrics to “Settle Down” or “Off to Missouri”—I figured it was just a combination of dense choral arrangements and muddy audio that kept me from understanding the Hall Johnson Choir on the film soundtrack, but I found I couldn’t understand the Moscow Symphony Choir on the re-recording either. All I can make out is that “Off to Missouri” presumably begins with those words and ends with, “…we’ll be in Missouri someday,” and I think there’s a line somewhere in the middle that runs, “Nights are so long and the days are so weary…” Anyway, while working on this post I did a little searching online and found a forum thread with a post by composer John Morgan, who restored Tiomkin’s score for the Moscow Symphony re-recording—he reveals that no one actually knows what the lyrics are because they were apparently never written down! For the restored version they had to make do with listening to the original and improvising where they couldn’t understand it. So it’s not just me after all.)

“Old Chisolm Trail,” meanwhile, accompanies the shots of an old handwritten manuscript that guide us through the story, in an arrangement of horns, a rippling harp and the hum of choir that creates a nostalgic, time-traveling effect. It also crops up more subtly here and there throughout the score at key moments relating to the cattle drive. One could say that while “Off to Missouri” is the theme for the actual work of the drive, the grit and sweat and danger, “Old Chisolm Trail” underscores the historic aspect, the sense of achievement. There’s a great moment in one of the best tracks on the soundtrack, at 2:19 in “Birth of Red River D,” where the two songs are played together in a triumphant counterpoint, at the moment when Tom Dunson (John Wayne) brands his first two cattle—a foreshadowing of what’s to come. And is it an even subtler bit of musical foreshadowing that further back in the beginning of the film, when Dunson makes his assessment of the young Matt (Mickey Kuhn) with a laconic “He’ll do,” the music in the background (1:51 in “The Lone Survivor”) is a determined cue of “Old Chisolm Trail”?

Besides all this, there’s a pretty self-explanatory Indian-attack theme, cued whenever the threat of attack materializes or hovers just over the horizon, and a beautiful love theme, introduced at the beginning in “Dunson Heads South,” and surfacing again later whenever the script hearkens back to Dunson’s lost love (Coleen Gray)—e.g. “Out of the Past” and “Memory of Love.” And one of the marvelous things about the score is the Russian-born Tiomkin’s grasp of American folk songs and the deft way he uses them to highlight the action, even if it’s just a few notes—a bit of “Turkey in the Straw” to accompany a wagon train; “She’ll Be Comin’ Round the Mountain” for the railroad; a dash of “Oh, Susanna” for a celebration; and of course the single bittersweet use of “I Ride an Old Paint” in “The Missing Cowboy.” More prominently featured is “O Bury Me Not on the Lone Prairie,” which beautifully scores several scenes of just such a burial as the song describes, beginning with “Mexican Burial.”  This scene, incidentally, I’ve always felt to be a bit of foreshadowing in itself—the way that Groot (Walter Brennan) and young Matt stare after Dunson as he leaves the graveside, seemingly a little taken aback that he can turn so quickly from a funeral back to work. It’s almost a hint at what Dunson will become in the future.

But there was one discovery I made listening to the soundtrack CD that really impressed me. Early in the film, Tiomkin introduces a brief but beautiful little melody, one that seems to evoke a sense of the wide-open plains, of optimism and promise for the future. It’s Dunson’s own theme, and it’s only heard a few times in its original form. It appears for the first time at 1:11 of “Dunson Heads South,” and is developed most fully at 1:35 of “The Lone Survivor,” at the key moment when Dunson hands young Matt back his gun. It’s one of my favorite bits in the score, and I thought it was a shame that it’s only heard so briefly. Listening further, however, I realized that it does reappear—made over in a minor key, it becomes the ominous, threatening march that’s heard for the first time in “Latimer Burial,” at the first hint of Dunson’s impending tyranny, again in “Cottonwood Justice” when his men finally defy him, and finally builds to a crashing crescendo in “The Challenge” for the final confrontation. (What I colloquially refer to as the Dunson Gets Mad theme.) It’s still Dunson’s theme, but Tiomkin has made it over to reflect the gradual darkening and hardening of his character as the film goes on. It continues to follow Dunson as he pursues his revenge (“The Spectre Takes Form”), and haunts scenes where he is off-screen but uncomfortably present in the minds of other characters (“In Wait” and “Vigil in the Night”).

Without getting too deep into spoilers, the ending of Red River—changed from the magazine story it was based on—is one of my biggest quibbles with the movie. Not necessarily the way the writers chose to wrap up the plot itself, but its abruptness and sudden change of tone. If you’re aiming for redemption, okay, but something still has to be done with all that rage and tension that’s been building for the second half of the film—it’s got to be blown off somehow. It’s a little like watching a fuse burn up to a stick of dynamite and then having it go off with a pop instead of an explosion. In a musical sense, if Dunson has come full circle, shouldn’t we hear his musical theme restored to its original form too? But we don’t; there simply isn’t time. Which possibly begs the question: does it really make sense for Dunson to have come full circle at all?

But all of that is hardly Tiomkin’s fault. And what his music does for the film as it stands is really wonderful. For instance, after you’ve listened to the score by itself, if you go back and watch the conversation between Dunson and Tess Millay (Joanne Dru), the scene accompanied by the track “Out of the Past,” you realize that all throughout it Tiomkin is subtly invoking a few bars of the different musical themes, one after another, to match what they’re talking about. I love it when a film score becomes an instrument of storytelling like that. I just hadn’t realized that, under all the noise of bawling cattle, the score of Red River did it so well.

Filed Under: Film and TV, Music, Westerns

Soundtrack for a Story: The Mountain of the Wolf

June 13, 2016 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 2 Comments

The soundtrack for this story is a bit shorter one. When I began plotting/writing The Mountain of the Wolf, I initially didn’t have any “inspiration music” at all. Then while working on the first draft, I gradually began recognizing some songs that fit, and rediscovered a classical work that suits the story’s atmosphere (and coincidentally, its setting/plot) perfectly. Perhaps I’ll find some more as I continue to edit, but here’s what I’ve got for now:
  • “Lost” by Michael Buble
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  • “Chant of the Plains” by the Sons of the Pioneers
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  • “On the Trail” from the Grand Canyon Suite by Ferde Grofe

Selections from Billy The Kid by Aaron Copland:

  • “Introduction: The Open Prairie”
  • “Prairie Night”
  • “Gun Battle”
  • “Billy’s Death”
  • “Finale: The Open Prairie Again”

As for the story itself, it has me a little bemused at the moment. Last week I finished typing the rough draft I wrote in April, and discovered it was about five thousand words longer than I had expected. And that’s with one scene (which I cravenly skipped during the first draft because I was dry of ideas) still to be added. Now, how in the world did that happen? I guess there must have been a lot more scrawled in the margins of my notebook pages than I realized. (You should have seen me as I tried to type certain pages, turning the notebook this way and that as I tried to decipher from the various margin notes and scribbled arrows and crossings-out exactly which sentence was supposed to come next.)

 
image: ‘Silhouette of a cowboy on horseback’ by Allan Grant, 1949

    Filed Under: Lists, Music, The Mountain of the Wolf, Westerns

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