Elisabeth Grace Foley

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Talking Shop with the Brownings

August 16, 2015 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 3 Comments

Don’t you love it when a literary reference in a book leads you on to discover something else interesting?

I’ve been enjoying poetry quite a bit recently, so when I happened on a reference to Robert Browning in Angela Thirkell’s Summer Half, I followed my usual method of pursuing a reference: I hopped over to the Kindle Store and found a free volume of his poems—and on a whim, because I like books of letters, I also picked up the first volume of his correspondence with Elizabeth Barrett (later, of course, Barrett Browning). I’m finding it absolutely delightful so far. It’s intriguing to trace the growth of their friendship and become acquainted with their personalities through the letters. Robert writes in long, eager, running-out-of-breath sentences and seems to forget that he set out to say something else several pages ago, and Elizabeth has a most charming sense of humor. But an additional delight is their frequent conversations about writing. They talk of handwriting, critics, inspiration, and life as a writer in general. I’ve been highlighting my favorite passages as I go, and I thought I’d share a few:

From Elizabeth:

The most frequent general criticism I receive, is, I think, upon the style,—’if I would but change my style’! But that is an objection (isn’t it?) to the writer bodily? Buffon says, and every sincere writer must feel, that ‘Le style c’est l’homme’; a fact, however, scarcely calculated to lessen the objection with certain critics.

On another occasion:

What no mere critic sees, but what you, an artist, know, is the difference between the thing desired and the thing attained, between the idea in the writer’s mind and the ειδωλον [translation] cast off in his work. All the effort—the quick’ning of the breath and beating of the heart in pursuit, which is ruffling and injurious to the general effect of a composition; all which you call ‘insistency,’ and which many would call superfluity, and which is superfluous in a sense—you can pardon, because you understand. The great chasm between the thing I say, and the thing I would say, would be quite dispiriting to me, in spite even of such kindnesses as yours, if the desire did not master the despondency.

And again:

One may be laborious as a writer, without copying twelve times over. I believe there are people who will tell you in a moment what three times six is, without ‘doing it’ on their fingers; and in the same way one may work one’s verses in one’s head quite as laboriously as on paper—I maintain it. I consider myself a very patient, laborious writer—though dear Mr. Kenyon laughs me to scorn when I say so. And just see how it could be otherwise. If I were netting a purse I might be thinking of something else and drop my stitches; or even if I were writing verses to please a popular taste, I might be careless in it. But the pursuit of an Ideal acknowledged by the mind, will draw and concentrate the powers of the mind—and Art, you know, is a jealous god and demands the whole man—or woman. I cannot conceive of a sincere artist who is also a careless one—though one may have a quicker hand than another, in general,—and though all are liable to vicissitudes in the degree of facility—and to entanglements in the machinery, notwithstanding every degree of facility. You may write twenty lines one day—or even three like Euripides in three days—and a hundred lines in one more day—and yet on the hundred, may have been expended as much good work, as on the twenty and the three.

And then, not forgetting the practical side, some very sensible advice to Robert:

Thinking, dreaming, creating people like yourself, have two lives to bear instead of one, and therefore ought to sleep more than others.

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Filed Under: Poetry, The Writing Life

One-Year Anniversary: Left-Hand Kelly

June 25, 2015 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 1 Comment

I’ve never observed any of my books’ publication anniversaries before, for the simple reason that they always slipped past me while I was busy writing the next one. But I happened to notice recently when checking one of my Amazon pages that June 25th would mark one year since the release of Left-Hand Kelly, and that seemed like an occasion worth observing with a post.

 

As I wrote about in some detail before, Left-Hand Kelly took almost four years of off-and-on work to write and publish. I have a general idea, from journal entries, of when I starting actually writing it, but the single sheet of lined paper bearing the original idea is undated. I still have it in my catch-all binder, and I dug it out this morning to share it with you. The front side bears a brief synopsis of the plot, amazingly close to the finished product:

 

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On the other side, a list of character names, which also fell into place with remarkably little effort, and a few scraps of sentences that made it into the book in slightly altered form:

 

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I also pulled my old journals out of my hope chest today and paged through the entries relating to Left-Hand Kelly. Most of them are not very illuminating to anyone but the author—brief, slightly addled remarks that reflect the chaotic nature of the book’s creation: the difficulties of ending chapters properly, or picking up in the middle of a conversation left off several months before; worries over whether certain characters talk too much or not enough, even speculations on exactly who the protagonist might be. Endless recaps of exactly how much editing I guessed certain chapters would need. Frequent references to working in a creative haze (Jo March would call it a vortex), and fruitlessly wishing that mundane things like eating and sleeping didn’t have to get in the way.

February 21st, 2013: …I’m torn between thinking this story is really good and thinking it’s a mess. In other words, business as usual.

Last spring into early summer, if you recall, was occupied by pulling our whole house apart and painting every room—and at the same time, I was doing final edits on Left-Hand Kelly and formatting it for publication.

Wednesday, May 7th, 2014: I learned how to right-justify a table of contents last night! By setting tabs! With running leaders! The little things that can excite me.

Finally, I found the journal entry for June 25th of last year. This, my friends, is the life of an indie author.

June 25th: Exhaustion. Total exhaustion. Kitchen torn apart for painting—dog in heat—pouring rain—new book released.

Was it all worth it? Oh, yes. Not just for the thrill of good reviews or award nominations, but the fulfillment of seeing a story that spent so much time wrapped around my heart and mind turn into a real book. Even after a year, it’s a little hard to believe.

So if you’re curious enough to see where all this led…well, you could buy the book. And for a visual glimpse into the story, check out my Left-Hand Kelly Pinterest board.

Filed Under: Left-Hand Kelly, Notebooks, The Writing Life

The Life of Stories

January 12, 2015 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 4 Comments

My upcoming Western short story collection, Wanderlust Creek and Other Stories, now has a Goodreads page (in case you’d like to mark it to-read), with a book description (in case you want to know what it’s about), and a semi-official release goal: I’m aiming for March. There’ll be pre-orders at some point, of course; I’ll let you know when that happens.

There’ll be six stories in this collection:

  • “Single-Handed”
  • “The Rush at Mattie Arnold’s”
  • “A Search For Truth”
  • “The Mustanger’s Bride”
  • “Room Service”
  • “Wanderlust Creek”

Like Left-Hand Kelly, this book has been a long time brewing. The origins of half these stories go all the way back to before I published my very first book in the autumn of 2011. Yet it’s funny, looking back over my notes and first drafts, how different the life of the project was for each one. “Single-Handed” and “Room Service,” for instance, were both begun in 2011, and worked on periodically with gaps of months and even years in between, until I finally finished both in a feverish week-long burst of writing last July.

“The Rush at Mattie Arnold’s,” on the other hand, was an idea that came to me unexpectedly and got dashed off in just two or three days. It was some of the most fun I’ve had writing and one of the easiest stories to write. “The Mustanger’s Bride” was also great fun and was written in a spurt of a few days…except there was a gap of five months in the middle of the spurt.

I don’t have many outstanding memories of the composition process for “A Search For Truth,” but I do remember editing: it’s the story where I just kept on cutting out words. No plot changes, just heaps  and heaps of excess words that puzzled me with how in the world they got there in the first place. I have a feeling a few more will end up getting the boot in the final edit-and-proofread stage, too.

“Wanderlust Creek,” which is one of my favorites among my own stories, was a long time in development before it actually made it to the page. For several years I slowly accumulated pages of notes in one of my favorite note-taking notebooks, gradually putting scenes in order and straightening out a tangle of ideas for the climax. I think I had the subconscious feeling all along that I was waiting until I felt ready to do the idea justice—and I am glad I waited. I finally sat down to write it last summer and finished it over the course of a couple months.

But by hook or crook, by the long route or the short one, all six eventually made their way to the triumphant finish line of THE END, and by the end of this month, should have undergone their final edits and been fitted between the covers of a proof copy. And you know, I’m getting a bit excited.

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Filed Under: Short stories, The Writing Life, Wanderlust Creek and Other Stories, Westerns

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