Elisabeth Grace Foley

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Three Characters in Search of a Christmas Tree

December 21, 2021 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 2 Comments

Way back in the murky mists of time—that is to say, in my 2009 NaNoWriMo draft of what eventually became Land of Hills and Valleys—there were some unfinished Christmas scenes, including one where several characters went to cut down a Christmas tree. Since it didn’t advance the story at all, I didn’t include it in the rewritten version of the manuscript. This month, I thought it might be fun to dig out that unused scene and polish it up enough to share as an “outtake.” It wasn’t exactly good enough for that (I must say, it’s reassuring to see how much my writing has improved in twelve years), but I ended up taking the idea and a few lines from the original scene and wrote a couple of pages based off it.

It’s fairly different from the fragment in the old draft—Tony was originally in the scene too, and I decided to leave out some dialogue which I’d repurposed for a different scene in the finished novel. Chronologically, this would come around the beginning of Chapter 12 in Land of Hills and Valleys, and there are no spoilers for the novel in it. As far as story goes, it’s pure and total fluff, but I thought you might enjoy it:

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As Christmas drew closer I found myself harboring a nonsensical but potent longing: I wanted a Christmas tree. It didn’t make any sense, since I’d been invited to celebrate with the Stevensons. I was the only person in the house; there wouldn’t be anyone else to open gifts beside it on Christmas morning—no family to gather around it. But I wanted one all the same. I kept remembering how the Drapers’ big staid brick house, never very homelike at most times, seemed lit up by the big glowing tree in their parlor every December, and how it lent an extra touch of life and brightness to the faces and voices of the friends and relatives who gathered however briefly about it. Then I would look around the weather-beaten little ranch house and find it a bit bare and lonely on the short winter afternoons, marooned amid a white sea of great sweeping snowdrifts. A tree of any kind would make it seem more like a home.

I couldn’t go and cut one down by myself, but I still couldn’t bring myself to ask any of my ranch hands, even—or perhaps especially?—Ray. I was sure I’d see a smile or the twinkle of an eye that was entirely obliging but indulgent—I couldn’t bear to have anyone else see my silly little dream for exactly what it was.

I stalled self-consciously until we were into the week before Christmas, and then finally decided to ask Lane. I knew that even if he thought I was silly he would try not to show it, and would probably end up convincing himself that it made perfect sense. [Read more…]

Filed Under: Christmas, Flash fiction, Holidays, Land of Hills and Valleys

At the Turn of the Road

September 11, 2015 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 8 Comments

This piece was written in 2015 from the prompt to write a short story inspired by the above painting (“LaGrange vs. LaGrange” by Mort Kunstler).

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“They’re coming!”

A small boy ran barefoot up the steps to where the women were clustered, their wide skirts sweeping to the edges of the veranda. Priscilla’s throat went dry, and her fingers pressed tightly around the barrel of the rifle she held. She looked around with a sense of unreality at the others beside her. There was Sara Crosby who had never had occasion to touch a gun in her life before—Priscilla only hoped she would remember to hold it the right way up—there was Mrs. Eythe, who knew how to load and fire a rifle as well as either of her sons, now somewhere up north with General Lee. The firearms they held were a motley collection, mostly old flintlocks and fowling-pieces, but Catherine Moore had a nearly-new Enfield that had belonged to her husband.

The sound of trotting horses was heard round the bend now, and a puff of dust drifted ahead of it as a herald. The women filed down from the veranda, catching their skirts up from the dust by habit, and grouped themselves at the spot where the road narrowed to pass the house. In a moment the cavalry came in sight: dark-blue coats filmed with dust, faces carved hard with weariness and fighting, brown and bay horses snorting and sweating. Just behind the captain a sergeant and some men drove two prisoners in Confederate gray on foot—their hands tied, stumbling stiffly as if their feet were dead.

The captain reined in his horse and lifted a gauntleted hand, and the strung-out troop gradually jingled and rattled to a halt, piling up against itself in closer ranks. He lowered his hand and stared for a moment at the women with rifles, stared as if he thought his eyes were deceiving him—or as if he hoped they did. Priscilla’s eyes ran along the front rank of horsemen, across a seemingly innumerable amount of glinting sabers and holstered sidearms. The metal of her rifle-barrel was warm now from her fingers clutching it—her stomach roiled and there was a sour taste in her mouth. None of the women moved—their leveled rifles made a ragged fringe barely extending beyond their hooped skirts. Behind them, the leaves rustled gently in the stately old trees over the village green…where Catherine Moore’s husband had been hanged by a Union cavalry patrol two weeks before.

There was a determined calm among them, through Priscilla knew that more hearts beside her own must have been beating swiftly. They were old and young, many of them relations in some way, all of them neighbors. There were some who never spoke to each other more than they could help, but they were entirely in agreement on what was to be done today. They were united to prevent the repetition of a tragedy, this time at the expense of a frail white-haired little woman who sat by an open window in a small house on the far side of the green, unaware of what was taking place.

It was Catherine Moore who spoke, her voice firm and cool and bold. “Captain, we would that you turn over those two prisoners to us.”

The captain touched his wide-brimmed hat, bending slightly in stiff courtesy, but he did not remove it. “Madam, that I do not have the authority to do.”

“Neither do you have the authority to hang them. These men are not spies nor criminals, nor are they even deserters from their own army. They are entitled to be treated as prisoners of war.”

Priscilla’s hands trembled for the first time as she allowed herself to look toward the prisoners. She saw Jeff Prentiss, lean and ragged, his fair hair rough and grayed with dust, looking too dulled by exhaustion to know what was going on—his eyes blankly scanned the group of women; he stared straight at her for a second and Priscilla thought he did not recognize her.

The captain raised his voice slightly. “Ladies, I will ask you to remove from the road.”

There was not a flicker, not a word, not a hesitation among them. The motley rifles did not waver.

A sort of charged amusement ran through the ranks of cavalrymen, a murmur that spread back down the lines. A smart-looking lieutenant in blue said something about the monstrous regiment of women that it was just as well the captain did not hear. The second prisoner, a gaunt bearded man who was a stranger to the women, seemed to be almost enjoying the situation.

At last the captain sighed harshly. He lifted his hand palm upwards in resignation. “Madam, as a gentleman I have no other recourse. I will not turn these men over to you. But I will give you my word of honor that they will be safely delivered as prisoners of war.”

Catherine Moore’s gaze remained steadily fixed on him for a moment, as if she were trying to read something in his face. Then she raised the Enfield slightly, so it no longer aimed at the deep blue of the captain’s coat, but at the fairer blue of the sky. She said, “And may the curse of a just Heaven and a bereaved mother be upon you if you should break it.”

Priscilla saw one…two…several more heads in the front ranks of horsemen turn to look speculatively at their commander. He was not the only gentleman in the troop…and their silent scrutiny would bind him to his word if ever he should be tempted to break it. The captain gave an order, and the column of cavalry began with a jingling and rattling to turn itself about. Priscilla pressed forward suddenly, bumping the stock of her rifle against her neighbor’s elbow, trying to get a glimpse of Jeff Prentiss before the blue ranks closed about him. One more glimpse, for it was the last she would see of him for a long time…

A horse moved in front of him, and the cavalry was on its way—picking up its regular trot again. On the other side of the village green the breeze would bring the sound of the hoofbeats to old Mrs. Prentiss’s open window, and she would wonder what the sound was from.

As the last of the troopers disappeared round the bend the women broke ranks, their tongues loosed at last, skirts swishing as they crowded warmly round Catherine Moore. But Catherine stood like a stone, looking after the retreating soldiers, her husband’s Enfield in her hands.

Priscilla drew a deep shaky breath. She let her rifle slide through rather weak hands and rested the stock gently on the ground.

Filed Under: Civil War, Flash fiction

Conversation With a Firebrand

January 15, 2015 by Elisabeth Grace Foley 1 Comment

This little piece was written in 2015 off a prompt of “dialogue about fireworks.”

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“Three left,” said Carl, weighing them in his hand. “Three nice little sticks of imitation dynamite. I’m just trying to decide where to put them so they’ll count.”

“Count for what?” said Donna, sitting down on the top step above him.

“Lots of noise,” said Carl. “More noise than just three little pops. I want to start a good honest ruckus…if I can make one that won’t mean too much cleaning up afterwards.”

He leaned forward, elbows on his knees, and looked to his left at the long irregular line of saddle-horses switching their tails at the hitching-racks along the near side of the street. “If there was a way of landing them under just one particular person’s horse, and sending it kiting out of town alone…” He juggled the firecrackers in his hand vindictively. “I’d almost like to stir up the whole bunch of them.”

Donna shook her head. “The punishment wouldn’t be worth the crime. Not unless you prefer a tarring-and-feathering for the finale tonight instead of the bonfire.”

“Or that crowd over there,” said Carl, continuing to juggle. A sea of buggies and buckboards were hitched all around the schoolhouse across the bridge. Lights were just beginning to show in the schoolhouse windows as the sun approached its setting, and the sounds that drifted over to them were the tap of dancing feet and the high hum of Uncle George Hornby’s fiddle blundering around like a good-natured blue-fly. “Now that’d make a commotion. With the right aim…there’s a perfect spot to land them, right between the wheels of the minister’s buggy.”

“The minister’s buggy,” said Donna, “is the most expensive thing he owns, and it wouldn’t be fair to make him get it repaired when he has a hard enough time making ends meet. Besides, it wasn’t his fault.”

“What wasn’t his fault?” demanded Carl.

“Oh, I don’t blame you. It’s only natural to want to bust up something like that dance because you got left out of it.”

She spoke quite calmly. When one is just-barely-sixteen and still wears one’s hair in a long schoolgirl braid with a ribbon on it, one is privileged to speak candidly to sulky good-looking boys several years older.

“I was not left out,” said Carl. “I was deliberately snubbed. I’m sitting here planning riot and insurrection because Susan Winters practically—practically—promised I could take her to the Founder’s Day dance, and then today she walked by without looking at me and went with that long-legged Sonny MacDonald instead.”

“I never saw anything wrong with his legs,” said Donna.

“The ideal place for these infant explosives,” Carl went on, looking across at the schoolhouse as if he hadn’t heard her, “would be right through one of those windows—if I could only be sure of their lighting on the right person’s nose.”

“Whose nose—his, or hers?” said Donna. “You could always ask Sonny out back afterwards and punch his—but I wouldn’t; he’d make mincemeat out of you. And if you ask me, I don’t think Susan’s nose would be much of a loss to anybody.”

Carl turned his head and stared at her.

“But like you said,” Donna went on hastily, “you haven’t got much chance of hitting either with a firecracker. And you’d have to pay for the window, and the burns on the floor, and somebody’d probably upset the table with all the pies on it, and Grandma Weatherby would have a spell—”

Carl gave a combined choke and snort which was a laugh that had taken him unawares. “From the way you’ve got it all pictured, you sound like you appreciate a good ruckus yourself!”

“Sure I do,” said Donna, “but at the right place and time.”

Carl grumbled something unintelligible, and continued to look moodily across the bridge, shuffling the three firecrackers like a deck of cards. Donna gave a little sigh. Sometimes one gets tired of being just-barely-sixteen and wearing a ribbon in one’s hair…

One might as well take advantage of it. She said tartly, “Were you really jealous of Sonny, or are you just mad because you’ve got no one to go to the dance with?”

Carl dropped one of the firecrackers in the dirt, and turned to look up at her in astonishment before even picking it up.

“I don’t like being made a fool of,” he blurted angrily. “Everybody knew Susan was supposed to be going with me, and now they know she threw me over at the last minute.”

“So you’re sitting over here thinking about spooking people’s horses because you hate looking ridiculous.”

He glared at her for a minute, and then got up. “Just for that,” he said, “I’d be willing to go over to that dance right now.”

Donna’s eyes drifted to his hand. “And the firecrackers?”

Carl grinned suddenly. “If you’ll walk over with me, you can tell me where to plant ’em.”

Donna sprang up. “And I know, too,” she said. “The place for those is right in the bonfire, at the exact minute the mayor finishes making his speech.”

“That’s not bad,” Carl admitted, his eyebrows going up. “But I’ll bet a whole lot of people have already had the same idea.”

Donna laughed, and her eyes danced. “Sure they have. It’ll be great, won’t it?”

 

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Filed Under: Chatterbox, Dialogue, Flash fiction, Historical fiction, Humor

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